Hi, sorry about the delay in posting Friday's assignment, I went out of town for the weekend. Here is what I need you to do:

1. Read the chapter I handed out in class on Wednesday on revising for readability.

2. Go through your existing drafts and find 10 sentences that need revising

3. Post them to the discussion area under "revising for readability"

4. Identify by name recurring problems that you see in your writing, based on the included sentences

5. revise the affected sentences.

Thanks!